It's fear that forces people into despair. We don't fear anything, not a soul, so where do we meet our end? Hell if I know....
 
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Regards to Vescrutia
Sat May 02, 2009 7:53 pm by KAZZ
http://www.vescrutia.heavenforum.org

Let it be known, this village will (future wise)form an Alliance with the Chaos, and since we already have one with the Reality, we would be apart of Vescrutia. So posting on here will come to a stop, save for the fights that are still going, the missions that are still going, and talks.

Everything on this site by the way, will be on Vescrutia as well …

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PostSubject: Raven's Story   Tue Mar 17, 2009 1:43 pm

Name:Raven
Age:(He himself doesn't remember)
Birth date:march 28th
Blood:Type A
Hight:181 cm
Nationality:France
Things that are important:people that make him want to kill them,people that discover or creat new things.
Dislikes:Himeself for not being able to love anything.
What he wants:Proof that he existed.
Personality:he may not be a gentleman but he has a mature personalite that you can calmly communicate with because he isn't swayed by emotiones.he may seem gentle at first,but you can see a glimpse of his silent perversion becaus he finds pleasure in being in agony and pain.he has a virtuous mind like an average person,but you cannot change his view of life with incidents that involved innocent people in order to achieve his goals.you need somthing big to jolt his emotions.

History:he's one of three people that is associated with that man,who made the world tramble with fear a while back.for some reson,he does not have a life span.he has an immortal body that regenerates no matter how bad his body is damaged.no one knows what his real motives are,but he agrees with that man's actions and is loyal to his cause


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PostSubject: Re: Raven's Story   Tue Mar 17, 2009 3:16 pm

You know you should at least make your own character design instead of completely ripping off a series.
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PostSubject: Re: Raven's Story   Thu Mar 19, 2009 4:10 pm

yeah...this is a direct copy, but i don't really care ((though i am against completely biting another persons story...))

as long as you do a good job, then you can keep this and i won't have any problem with you
and remember, no being cheap.

welcome to the depths
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PostSubject: Re: Raven's Story   Fri Mar 20, 2009 12:42 am

Sorry no direct quotes XP thats a copyright, and no copyrights here XD so you can change the character and start over, since you didnt do anyhting yet it should be easy for you to make a comback. Im not being mad just real, Good day
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PostSubject: Re: Raven's Story   Wed Mar 25, 2009 9:22 am

Hey my bad I need it somthing and my frand sade to just go with what I hade so hey It's not my problem.
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PostSubject: lolz   Wed Mar 25, 2009 6:29 pm

lolz that body that cant be killed thing is kind of a "godmod"
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PostSubject: Re: Raven's Story   Thu Mar 26, 2009 9:05 am

What doeas that mean please tell me and if it's what I think it is then what the story sade is just somthing I made up for fun ok.
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