Damian's Bio

Name: Damian
Gender: Boy
Kekkei Genkai: Completely unaware at the moment
Element Uses: Completely unaware at the moment
Personality: Somewhat a shy person, yet an egar, and determined person.

Biography:

"I-I was young, around the age of seven or eight. I told them not too, but they never listen to me, they never listen to the small child of the family, always ignoring them, thinking the second child is always trying to steal the spotlight in every situation"
"My older sibling one day, woken me in the dead of night, and a bunch of his friends with him. 'Oh, get up, I have something to show you....' they chuckled, I didn't know better. So I followed them, blindfolded, my brother pointing and pushing me in an unknown mark terrian, a forbbiden section of the village. I heard whispers behind me, as my brother abruptly stopping me, ripping the blindfold from my petrified face, my gaze on a cave I have not seen before, it's icy breeze on my cheek. 'Go on, there's something in there, here i'll give ya a light.' He handed me a candle, shaken as I was I took each step with caution, looking around both ways, for a sign of a trick, my body vanishing into the depths of the cave."
"I heard screaming from the outside from the cave, I quickly ducked behind a rock, heavily breathing, sweating from being afraid, a monsterous growl rampaging ripping the tree's and earth from it's undisurbed spot from outside the cave. A yelp flew into the cave, a body banging against the cave wall. The monster's unknown point, hearing breaking of human bones, the screams died. Heavily breathing coming closer to me. I begin to shake, not knowing what to do, I whisper something 'Please let it leave me ALONE!' As I said this, I turned around, there it was, a scorpion like creature, thursting it's arms into the rock, which kept me safe, the light gone out, not knowing where I was."
"When I awoke again, I appeared in a hospital, bandages covering my body, looking at the door to my room, four heavily armed men walked in grabbing me, forcing me into a portal forming in the wall of the hospital room, I fell through, falling unconscience, losing memory of my past, my clan, my power, everything. I was sent to a white blank room, a straight jacket covering me, I banged my body into the metal door, screaming, my head begining to bleed, I clentch my teeth, baring my sharp teeth angrly, not knowing where I was."

(will continue later)

You should edit. Bad grammar and broken English is a little confusing...

sorry for the grammer key board is very retarded today for some reason

Beautifully written, except for small grammar mishaps. Welcome to the village, I will be looking forward to the rest of that story now.

Yea... sorry for not saying anything but bad grammar... its a cool story, nice and mysterious

I shall side Rose on the beautifully written part, welcome to the village...

I like it, welcome to the village, and i look foward to seeing your progress